I feel like I have
had a major breakthrough with my film opening today. I am reaching the point
where I am starting to fully develop each scene. I have divided my film into 7
scenes so that I can easily optimize my drafting and time. I am very excited
about my project because I feel that with my effective planning, I plan on
storyboarding my ideas in the upcoming days so that I can visually draft my
written draft. Now that I have my full ideas written out, I can move onto further
development as far as production. I’ve
attached my planning for each scene, a script will be coming up next.
*FYI*
I forgot what I was going to say. Hopefully I will be back with my original thought! I'M BACK!! I wanted to give you all a heads up that I am still adjusting to the characters name, so I will be referencing the actors name so that I do not confuse each character. Here is a little guide to the characters and their real name!
Trinity (Trin) Williams- Nina
Aneesa (Neesa) Williams- Stacia
` Scene Development: Final Floor
Scene 1: Introducing the character
- - Need to establish setting
- - STORYBOARD
- -FOLEY!
- -Taking pictures @ UM sign
- - “Okay
mom we will be back!”
Scene 2: Walking/ some suspicion
- -Outside characters looking at her (Isa/Sabrita/Sophi/Sebastian/Xamir/Lucia)
- -Rising Action
- -Weird Elevator man (Xamir)
-
*IDEA*
character holding the door open for them, standing in front of the elevator
before it closes, “enjoy… good luck!” eerie character
- -“You
have reached the 10th floor, have a great day”
Scene 3: Into the elevator/time in elevator
- -Enter
elevator, zoom in on the elevator buttons
- - Faint
elevator music in the back
- -Aneesa
jumping. Trin “stop jumping before we get stuck in here!”
- - Going
up to elevator, gets stuck “see what happened, I told you not to jump, you
broke it” “don’t worry, I’m sure this happens all of the time” (tries budging
the elevator, not working, cut to elevator buttons going off then a ding) girls
stagnant, “trin what’s going on”
Scene 4: First challenge/Conflict
- - Elevator
opens (add blue tint over the film so that it has the eerie sense)
- -Stumbling/uncertainty
- -Head hurting^ stumbling
- -What is going to be the challenge?
Research challenges that work to create suspense/conflict
- - Must be a game
Scene 5: They won!
- -When the character wins, they spin
with camera movements (chaotic movements and zoom in and fast action movement, music
silences- pause at the elevator ding, scared look) in relation with the ding/
back in the elevator for the next ring
- -Cut to black
Scene 6: What is going on?
- -Characters wake up, on the ground
- -POV shot of Aneesa facing trin, eye
blinking effect
- -Use foley to show overbearing
heartbeat
- -Muffled “trin…what’s going on”
- -Cut to characters getting up, head
is clearing
Scene 7: Final
- -Running to press the buttons on the
elevator
- -Elevator dings
- -Xamir pops back up again “You have reached the 10th
floor, have a great day”
- -Aneesa
shaking creepy man (xamir’s) hand, holding it in a horrified look, creepy man
smiling
- - Suspenseful music
- -Over the shoulder shot of Xamir,
trin and neesa facing him, zoom in
- -“Where the hell are we”
- -Cut to black
Here's an accomplishment photo! Feeling good.
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